It appears you have not registered with our community. To register please click here ...

Author Topic: Family Activity Gathering  (Read 1607 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline Oni

  • The Reformed AristroCat.
  • Hero Member
  • *****
  • Posts: 5,813
  • Gender: Male
  • Meowmix
    • Alaska Community
Family Activity Gathering
« on: 2009, April 07, 09:55:03 am »


What do you guys think of the new flier?

Glad to be of Service.


"I suffer from A.D.O.S.                     Attention deficit.......OOOOOHH! SHINY!!"

Offline Eternimus

  • Amazingly Violent
  • Hero Member
  • *****
  • Posts: 601
  • Gender: Male
  • Head of House Shadowstar
Re: Family Activity Gathering
« Reply #1 on: 2009, April 07, 11:17:27 am »
Aside from the typos? Not bad.
Quote
If a scene calls for 60 ninjas, it takes 10 weeks to find them, even if they are in the same elevator as you.
~Seanbaby, Cracked.com

Offline aksnowgirl98

  • Full Member
  • ***
  • Posts: 184
Re: Family Activity Gathering
« Reply #2 on: 2009, April 07, 09:26:22 pm »
Looks good.

Offline Taylor-MadeAK

  • Hero Member
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,625
  • Gender: Male
  • CARRIER HAS ARRIVED.
    • Taylor-Made Brewing - Sake!
Re: Family Activity Gathering
« Reply #3 on: 2009, April 07, 09:45:30 pm »
<compulsory>

So...we've gone from the backward "GaY!" to a straight up "FAG"? 

</compulsory>
¶▤▒▒▒▒▒▒∑▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇
"A more elegant weapon from a more civilized time...."

Offline Oni

  • The Reformed AristroCat.
  • Hero Member
  • *****
  • Posts: 5,813
  • Gender: Male
  • Meowmix
    • Alaska Community
Re: Family Activity Gathering
« Reply #4 on: 2009, April 08, 07:11:36 am »
But ya. You complained about GaY! so I Changed it. I do hope your happy. lol.

Well ya. now we go to our weekly FAG meetings. LOL.
Glad to be of Service.


"I suffer from A.D.O.S.                     Attention deficit.......OOOOOHH! SHINY!!"

Offline Oni

  • The Reformed AristroCat.
  • Hero Member
  • *****
  • Posts: 5,813
  • Gender: Male
  • Meowmix
    • Alaska Community
Re: Family Activity Gathering
« Reply #5 on: 2009, April 09, 09:03:28 am »
Would some mind typing this out grammatically correct for me please.
Glad to be of Service.


"I suffer from A.D.O.S.                     Attention deficit.......OOOOOHH! SHINY!!"

Offline Reythefox

  • Full Member
  • ***
  • Posts: 144
  • Gender: Male
  • A fox? GO POKEBALL!
    • Furaffinity
Re: Family Activity Gathering
« Reply #6 on: 2009, April 10, 09:18:17 pm »
That FAG was very interisting...
Thanks for the ride Oni :3

Offline Oni

  • The Reformed AristroCat.
  • Hero Member
  • *****
  • Posts: 5,813
  • Gender: Male
  • Meowmix
    • Alaska Community
Re: Family Activity Gathering
« Reply #7 on: 2009, April 11, 07:50:26 am »
Glad ya had fun.
Glad to be of Service.


"I suffer from A.D.O.S.                     Attention deficit.......OOOOOHH! SHINY!!"

Offline Reythefox

  • Full Member
  • ***
  • Posts: 144
  • Gender: Male
  • A fox? GO POKEBALL!
    • Furaffinity
Re: Family Activity Gathering
« Reply #8 on: 2009, April 11, 09:59:57 am »
The funny thing is within 30 min of being dropped off wasa couple blocks down the street from all of you.
xD

Offline Northtrax

  • Newb
  • *
  • Posts: 25
  • Gender: Female
Re: Family Activity Gathering
« Reply #9 on: 2009, April 15, 01:09:42 pm »
Cute.  Official nonprofit-looking.  Sounds disgustingly wholesome, and may attract some really innocent people who need to be there very much.  -Be ready to run interference for them until they get used to us.   ;)
May also attract moochers.
Good move leaving the FAG abbreviation for the reader to figure out.  E-mail me the clean text, and I'll proofread it for you.  Might want to add 'national origin' or 'nationality' to the we-don't-hate-you list.

Offline Northtrax

  • Newb
  • *
  • Posts: 25
  • Gender: Female
Re: Family Activity Gathering
« Reply #10 on: 2009, April 26, 01:07:18 am »
Suggested text, after proofreading and fixing a few errors.
------------------------------------------------------

Our focus is to provide a place where children, young adults and families can feel comfortable being themselves without fear of being rejected or ridiculed by their peers.  We teach tolerance, encourage making new friends, and encourage forming new social bonds.

We provide a clean, wholesome environment and enriching activities like open discussion groups, cooking, field trips, fishing, camping, and the occasional snowball fight.

At our weekly Family Activity Gatherings, we open our doors to anyone who wants to attend regardless of creed, sexual preference, or skin color.

When: Every Friday from 6:00 PM until 9:00 PM
Where: 834 North Lane St. #1, Anchorage AK, 99508

Welcome to AKCommunity
A place where you can be yourself and fit in all at the same time.
907-360-3012

WWW.AKCommunity.com

---------------------------------------------
...You might also add 'national origin' to the list of things don't discriminate against, but I didn't want to add it without mentioning it.